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Kia Ora Tyler,I am Denise, I like how you describe your favorite vegetables and the vegetables you hate.I also like how you put more information, what it taste like, and I also like how your background is not that colorful.
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Kia Ora Tyler,I am Denise,
ReplyDeleteI like how you describe your favorite vegetables and the vegetables you hate.I also like how you put more information, what it taste like, and I also like how your background is not that colorful.