This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note… some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Kia Ora Tyler, I really like how you describe your scary monster and your monster is awesome.I also like the picture and how you describe what's it like.Please comment on my blog.
Hello Tyler, I like your monster and your writing. Did you think about the colors and the detail. Next time, could you add in the other colors of the monster. How long did it take you to make this?
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Kia Ora Tyler,
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Hello Tyler, I like your monster and your writing. Did you think about the colors and the detail. Next time, could you add in the other colors of the monster. How long did it take you to make this?
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