This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note… some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Yesterday we read a book called the magnificent tree. We had to make a playground for birds and it was fun. First we had to start on a white board then on paper and after that we had to do it on the Chromebook. By Tyler,Kayne
Hi Tyler I really like your bird piaza. I do not know what a bird Piaza is. So i can no what it is. Next time you can put why you read that story and what is about can you tail me what is it about.
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Hi Tyler I really like your bird piaza. I do not know what a bird Piaza is. So i can no what it is. Next time you can put why you read that story and what is about can you tail me what is it about.
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