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Kia ora Tyler, I really like how you put details on your holiday recount and what happened on your holiday. This reminded me when I had a play date with my friend when we had a water fight. Maybe you could put capital letters after you put full stops. Also What happened after the next day, did you do something fun?
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Kia ora Tyler, I really like how you put details on your holiday recount and what happened on your holiday. This reminded me when I had a play date with my friend when we had a water fight. Maybe you could put capital letters after you put full stops. Also What happened after the next day, did you do something fun?
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