This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note… some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
What a good idea to make your background your favourite colour. Reading is a great subject if you like reading you can find out about anything you need to know. I'm happy to read that you are kind to your brother because being kind is so very important. Nice job with your first blog post for 2010 Mrs S
Hey Tyler, Your post caught my eye when I saw your character you made, it looks amazing. Maybe next time you can have a bigger blurb so you can fit in more information. The character you created looks a little bit like my one. In the Pokemon game whats your most favorite Pokemon? By Arie.
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What a good idea to make your background your favourite colour. Reading is a great subject if you like reading you can find out about anything you need to know. I'm happy to read that you are kind to your brother because being kind is so very important.
ReplyDeleteNice job with your first blog post for 2010
Mrs S
Hey Tyler, Your post caught my eye when I saw your character you made, it looks amazing. Maybe next time you can have a bigger blurb so you can fit in more information. The character you created looks a little bit like my one. In the Pokemon game whats your most favorite Pokemon? By Arie.
ReplyDeleteMy favorite pokemon is lunala
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