This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note… some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Hey Tyler, I like your animation because you added in steps so kids know what to do it reminds me of my animation about how to brush your teeth. Maybe next time you might want to add a bit more color and detail. Also why does it not tell you what to do with the tooth brush? I get you will fix that up though. Bye Tyler!
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Hey Tyler, I like your animation because you added in steps so kids know what to do it reminds me of my animation about how to brush your teeth. Maybe next time you might want to add a bit more color and detail. Also why does it not tell you what to do with the tooth brush? I get you will fix that up though. Bye Tyler!
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