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Thursday, 13 June 2019

Stan

This week I have been working on a piece of writing called repetition writing repetition writing is when you say something you repeat the thing you say like if you say the dog went out you would say that again but add something on to it and I wrote story about what Stan does for a living and and I hope you like reading this wring.



There was a man named Stan who had a can

There was a man named Stan who had a can
Stan could ban anyone from getting a tan

There was a man named Stan who had a can
Stan could ban anyone from getting a tan
Stan was in a clan

There was a man named Stan who had a can
Stan could ban anyone from getting a tan
Stan was in a clan
Stan made a plan to scan Jan

There was a man named Stan who had a can
Stan could ban anyone from getting a tan


Stan was in a clan
Stan made a plan to scan Jan
Stan also lives in a van

There was a man named Stan who had a can
Stan could ban anyone from getting a tan
Stan was in a clan
Stan made a plan to scan Jan
Stan also lives in a van
One day Stan made a master plan to become batman and his friend Dan become peter pan

There was a man named Stan who had a can
Stan could ban anyone from getting a tan
Stan was in a clan
Stan made a plan to scan Jan
Stan also lives in a van

One day Stan made a master plan to become batman and his friend Dan become peter pan. One day Stan and Dan hopped into Stan van and when Stan was driving his van Dan was watching the bogeyman.



2 comments:

  1. Hi Tyler, I love your work because it's about a man with a funny name called Stan. This reminds me of my repetition poem you should check it out. Maybe you can fix your writing so you story doesn't go out of the page. Also why does Stan look like a hill billy. Bye Tyler! ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)

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    1. because I like making hill billy's :^)

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